Brief idea of the frist 2 chapters

Chapter0 “Original Sin”
Telling the Adam and Eve story in a weird way:
The scroll consists of 6 images, and each image has a 100words description in it. In the Animation, the characters, and the background will move a bit, while a voice over is telling the story. The whole animation will last about 30 seconds. After the Animation finished, it will have a transition from animation to the comic. The Scroll will close and Pan out, See Marto and T1Bus on the Mountain Looking down to the city. The last frame of the animation will be the first frame of the comics.

Chapter1 “Accident & Coincidence”
Marto was late to Francis’s Place, over speed a bit, suddenly see a Vesper driving next to him. The rider reminds Marto of someone, so he drives closer unintentionally to see closer, but nearly ran into the Vesper. The bike fell down, and the rider drop out of the bike. Marto went out of the Bus and see if the rider is OK or not. Look closely realize that see looks like a girl he knew, rider suddenly woke up and snap Marto’s face and drove away, seems like she was late as well. Get to Francis’s place; see the rider outside Francis’s place again.

Hope these 2 chapters and the Proposal will be done by Darwin comes back